An Iteration in Progress

 This doesn't seem like much but it took me a while and much frustration to make. It's not completed yet, but I thought I could post it for some feedback. I think I am going to add some hands grabbing the "framed image" and do something else to make Elton's face not look like himself so much. Maybe I'll make the hands look like they're pulling the image apart. I am going to go back and do some more to the last image I posted, but I wanted to take a break to try something new. Let me know if you have any ideas for other versions!



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  1. Dejah C.September 25, 2020 at 11:53 AM

    I really like this iteration! I think you put a lot of work into it. Trust me, I know how frustrating it can be working with photoshop, especially when you are new to it. I love the concept of this, it is giving me "car ride home from after school" vibes. Like the majority of my iterations, they are organized. This one seems to be more organized than the others just because everything is clearly stated and visualized. Overall, I like what you have done.

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    1. Jordan JenningsSeptember 28, 2020 at 10:24 AM

      I like this iteration and that you are really trying to push your knowledge of Photoshop. I can see that you're really putting in the work here! I think the only suggestion I can think of is that the composition of the brick wall laying on top is a bit confusing. It feels very heavy for it to be on top of the photo. But other than that I like that you're taking it in a direction I wouldn't have thought of! :-)

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